英语大作文模板笔记

第一段

1 As is shown in the chart ( line chart, bar chart 曲线和柱状图), we can see that a noticeable change in 中文。 A increased / declined over xx years (from xxx to xxx) , and it reached to + 数值 （最高值） in the year of . (B increased / declined over xx years (from xxx to xxx) , and it reached to + 数值 （最高值） in the year of _.)

柱状图 demo

As is shown in the bar chart, we can see that a noticeable change in the data between urban and rural population in China during the past two decades. The urban people increased from 1990 to 2010，and it reached to 660 million in the year of 2010. By contrast, the number of rural population decreased remarkably. We can see that in 2010, two bars almost kept at the same line.

The bar chart above clearly reflects / shows(体现，反映) the changes in the data between urban and rural population in China during the past two decades.

For urban people / residents(城镇居民), there was a noticeable(明显) jump, (the number increased sharply) from 300 million to 660 million between 1990 and 2010 (during 20 years). By contrast(对比而言）, a remarkable(显著地) decline occurred in the number of rural population during the same period （the number of rural population decreased remarkably). It's obvious that （ we can see that ) in 2010, two bars almost kept at the same line.

真题练习

As is shown in the bar chart, we can see that a noticeable change in statistics on choices of graduates between 2013 and 2018.Most graduates chose to work, but the number decreased gradually. The number of graduates receiving further study increased a lot. While, the increasing number of graduates who started their own businesses still accounted for a small part, to 2.6%.

2 As is shown in the pie chart（饼状图）, we can see different percentages（比例） of _中文。In the chart, A takes up a lion’s share（占比最高）, accounting for xx% of the total. The next (two / three) items are..., which are x% and x% respectively.

饼状图 demo

As is shown in the pie chart, we can see different percentage of factors customers concerned when they chose restaurants in one city in 2017. In the chart, the features takes up a lion’s share, accounting for 36.3% of the total. The next four items are service, environment, price and other factors, which are 26.8% , 24.2%, 8% and 4.7% respectively.

3 As is shown in the table 表格, we can see that_ 中文。纵轴 1，2，3 对应横轴同一组数据分析。

表格 demo

As is shown in the table, we can see a survey on job satisfactory of employees in a company. In this survey, half of employees under 40 are unclear to their jobs. While, 64% of them between 41and 50 are dissatisfied with jobs. At last, almost half of them over 50 feel satisfied with their jobs.

第二段

There are several factors responsible for above phenomenon.

Firstly Secondly Thirdly

On one hand On the other hand

原因：政府，社会，经济，个人，科技 （任选2-3点）

1 政府

There is no doubt that this phenomenon has much to do with the policies that our government has adopted （to speed up China’s urbanization 城镇化发展 / encourage development of private-enterprises 私营企业 / state-owned enterprise 国有企业 / effectively protect environment around us 有效保护了我们周边的环境）

2 社会

With help of our society, increasing number of relevant facilities and resources are available, such as （museums）.

With the rapid development of our society, more have realized that it is very important for them to get social experience, which requires them of more part-time jobs.

随着社会的快速发展，越来越多的人意识到获得社会经验是非常重要的，这就要求他们做更多的兼职工作。

3 经济

With the policy of reform and opening up（改革开发）, our living standard has been greatly improved, therefore we can afford sth

随着改革开放，人们生活水平提高，能买得起...

With the rapid development of our economy, there is an increasing demand for a high-quality life, so we prefer more spiritual life than material one.

随着经济发展，人们的高品质生活需求越来越高，相比物质基础来说，更追求精神生活。

4 个人

With the stable（稳定的）improvement of people’s living standard, the public care more about spiritual life, so more choose to visit museums.

随着生活水平提高，大众开始更多的关注精神需求

The rising awareness（意识）of xxx (environmental-protection) in public brings great changes to above phenomenon.

大众xxx意识的提高给上述现象带来了巨大变化。

5 科技

The rise of xxx (local car-business), mainly due to development of technology, is of little surprise, which not only free them from potential risks, but also bring them long-term benefits（利益）

由于科技带来xxx的发展，并不令人惊奇。xxx的发展不仅解决了当前潜在的危机，还给他们带来了长远的利益

范文

Apparently, a host of factors are responsible for the emergence of such a phenomenon; from my standpoint, the following two are the most essential ones. Firstly, With the policy of reform and opening up, our living standard has been greatly improved, price is no longer their primary concern when dining in a restaurant. Another equally vital element worth mentioning is the shift of people' s attitudes towards life. According to an official report released recently, people in increasing number nowadays are inclined to try novel experience, which explains why the specialty of a restaurant is so important to many people.

显然，许多因素导致了这种现象的出现;在我看来，以下两点是最重要的。首先，随着改革开放的政策，我们的生活水平有了很大的提高，价格不再是他们在餐馆吃饭时最关心的问题。另一个同样重要的因素是人们对生活态度的转变。根据最近发布的一份官方报告，如今越来越多的人倾向于尝试新的体验，这就解释了为什么一家餐馆的特色对许多人来说是如此重要。

There are several factors responsible for above phenomenon. To begin with, it is widely admitted that with the rapid development of our economy, there is an increasing demand for a high-quality life, so we prefer more spiritual life than material one. In addition, there is no doubt that this phenomenon has much to do with the policies that our government has adopted to protect and promote the development of cultural industry, which encourages a widespread extension of visitors.

有几个因素导致上述现象。首先，人们普遍认为，随着我国经济的快速发展，对高质量生活的需求越来越大，所以我们更喜欢精神生活而不是物质生活。此外，毫无疑问，这一现象与我国政府采取的保护和促进文化产业发展的政策有很大关系，这些政策鼓励了游客的广泛增长。

It is not difficult for us to come up with some possible factors accounting for this trend, On the one hand, with the rapid development of economy and society, people in mounting numbers crowd into cities in search of employment, a decent living and the excitement of urban life recently. On the other hand, the economy in the rural districts is comparative less developed and thus the opportunity to make money and pursue their future is as well lean. As a result, an increasing number of folks are trying to escape this destiny by flocking into the urban areas.

想出一些可能的因素来解释这个趋势对我们来说并不困难。一方面近年来,随着经济和社会的快速增长,越来越多的人涌入城市寻找就业机会、感受体面的生活以及寻求城市生活的刺激感。另一方面,农村地区经济相对不发达,赚钱和追寻未来的机会也比较少。因此,越来越多的人蜂拥而至城市,试图通过这种方式来摆脱这种命运。

第三段

Taking all these factors into account, we can believe this phenomenon is quite normal（正常的） and predict that the present situation（当前状况 ）will continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years.

考虑到所有这些因素，我们可以相信这种现象是相当正常的，并预测目前的情况将在未来几年继续相当长一段时间。

Taking into account all the factors discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that the trend observed will continue in the coming years and exert far-reaching effect on the individuals as well as the whole society.

综上所述,我们可以自信地得出结论,这种趋势将在未来几年继续存在,并对个人和整个社会产生深远的影响。